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The pie charts compare spending in Japan and Malaysia in terms of various categories in 2010.

Overall, spending on housing and food and others goods and services accounted for the largest proportion of expenses in both Japan and Malaysia. In addition, Japan expenditures on transport and health care were double compared with Malaysia.

34% of expenses in Malaysia, which accounted for the largest part, was for housing while the figure for Japan was 21%. In terms of food, the figure for Malaysia was slightly higher more than that for Japan, at 27% and 24% respectively. However, the proportion of others goods and services in the expenditure of Japan (29%) was 3% more than that in expenses of inhabitants in Malaysia (26%).

The percentage of spending on health care was lowest in both nations, at 6% (Japan) and 3% ( Malaysia). In Japan, 20% of household spending went on transport. This figure was double that shown for Malaysia.