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Domdom Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

could you check and correct this english writng

When I was 20 I dreamed that I fell off from a high place. I felt free and so comfortable as I was falling down that I wanted to live forever with it(?) / I wanted to live forever feeling it(?). I felt like I would be eternal.
  

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as I was falling that I wanted to keep the feeling forever, as if I were eternal. This is just a suggestion, but I think it fits the message you are trying to convey. I hope it help.

— Philip

  • as I was falling that I wanted to keep the feeling forever, as if I were eternal.
  • This is just a suggestion, but I think it fits the message you are trying to convey.
  • I hope it help.
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...as I was falling that I wanted to keep the feeling forever, as if I were eternal. This is just a suggestion, but I think it fits the message you are trying to convey. I hope it help.
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"falling down" and "fall" can sound different here?
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Have you ever fallen 'up'? Emotion: wink
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