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Snuppelina Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
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A new detector of the focal plane of the separator is suggested to be developed with the aim to increase energy resolution and efficiency of the registration and to reduce the probability of background events when studying the properties of superheavy nuclei.
I personally don't like "with the aim", "is suggested to be developed". How would you paraphraze it?
Thanks.
I personally don't like "with the aim", "is suggested to be developed". How would you paraphraze it?
Thanks.
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snuppelina "is suggested to be developed" X is suggested to be developed doesn't work. ] suggest that X be developed It [is / has been] suggested that X be developed _________ with the aim to increase should be with the aim of increasing . But then you don't like with the aim at all.
- snuppelina "is suggested to be developed" X is suggested to be developed doesn't work.
- ] suggest that X be developed It [is / has been] suggested that X be developed _________ with the aim to increase should be with the aim of increasing .
- But then you don't like with the aim at all.
- _________ In general, you're trying to say too much in one sentence.
- I don't know your field of study, but something like this might serve your purpose.
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snuppelina"is suggested to be developed"X is suggested to be developed doesn't work. You mean one of these:
The development of X is suggested
[I / We / ...] suggest that X be developed
It [is / has been] suggested that X be developed
_________
with the aim to increase should be
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