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Anglista2008 Posted 18 years ago
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could you check a part 1 of my CV, please?

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01i00ISB - it is a picture based search engine. With their mobile phones, Users can take a picture of an object of interest and send this picture via MMS to a dedicated service number. A response is delivered to the/a User containing useful information and links. Most of services are reached under one number. (the ???) Content is selected by an image, eg. when an user sends a photo of an object, the dedicated server generates an (the?) answer02i00 01i00which02i00 01i00is based upon the user updated (updated by users ???) data (datebase ???).02br
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02br 02br 00Your CV should tell me about you. 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive0-

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0Hi,02br
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00Here's my immediate reaction on reading this.02br
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00Your CV should tell me about you. This tells me nothing about you.02br
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00Best wishes, Clive0-
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0 this is just a small part of my CV... anyway, could you check if there are any mistakes here? thanks 0-
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0Hi,02br
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01i00ISB - iis a picture based search engine. With their mobile phones, users can take a picture of an object of interest and send this picture via MMS to a dedicated service number. A response is delivered to the user containing useful information and links. Most services are reached via one number. Content is selected by an image, eg when an user sends
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0 thanks Clive,02br
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00why is there no article before 01i00conten 02i00? 02br
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00here's another part, would you mind taking a look?02br
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01i00The service is used by newspaper (e.g. Time) as well. Users can take a picture of a particular article (some articles are marked with a special sign) and
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0Hi,02br
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01font00why is there no article before 01i00conten01b00t02b00 02i00? 00In a context like this, 'content' is often treated as uncountable.02br
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00here's another part, would you mind taking a look?02br
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