Could you check 2 sentences please?
The study of the Northern Pacific ecological capacity revealed that there are no serious natural restrictions for expanding pasture salmon farming in the Far East.
Practical realization of the materials received in expeditions is the advance and operative forecasting of salmon approaches to spawning places and development of actual and scientifically- proved (steps or measures?) , that will manage their (production?).
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The first one is okay, but the second is not. I suggest you rewrite that second part in a clear, easy-to-understand and direct manner.
- The first one is okay, but the second is not.
- I suggest you rewrite that second part in a clear, easy-to-understand and direct manner.
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The first one is okay, but the second is not. I suggest you rewrite that second part in a clear, easy-to-understand and direct manner.
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