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Alc24 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Could you be so kind as to go over my corrections??

I've tried my best to correct these. Could you please go over my corrections?

- Losing feels worse than winning feels good/Losing is worse than winning is good. both
- You remember a good session where you win a lot more than when you lose alot.
- No ones the same when they win or/as lose. both
- He slammed the door shut harder than me.
- The little time that I did spend at home, I wasn't going to spend it cooking.
- She has to be something to be in such a line of work. She has to be either crazy or unaware of the risks. ok if SOMETHING refers to being crazy etc...

- Its in human nature to want to do something that someone else is doing like wanting to play with something that someone is playing with. ok

- In the video game you start (off) where you die. optional

- Which video car game is the easiest to drive. (how would you say it?) i don't know

- The higher the temperature gets outside the lower it gets on the termameter. Its broken. ok

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