Could you be so kind as to assist me in checking this new Motivation Letter

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01b01font00I am about to apply for International Law at Utrecht University in Holland. I am really late in submitting my application and it is the first time I'm writing a motivation letter, therefore I kindly ask you to help me in checking it. I appreciate your time and kindness. 05000. Below is my FIRST Motivation Letter. 05102font02b02br
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01font01b00Motivation letter02b00 for Utrecht 01b00University02b00 (Holland)02font02br
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01i01font00Dear Members of the Board of Admission of Utrecht University,02font02i02br
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01font00My name is XXX and I am an YYY high school student to be graduated in June this year interested in applying for a Bachelor’s Degree in International Law program at your University. My apperception advices me that the first important decision in life, guiding towards ones future, refers to accurately decide on the right academic institution to provide with the proper academic background which will certainly help me with my professional life. After a thorough examination of your BA Program in International Law, I understood that UCU is the academic institution that may adequately provide me with the best alternative for high-level studying. I am interested in this program as deeper knowledge of law, in particular its international insights, will certainly help me in better assessing the jurisprudence sphere. I undoubtedly aspire to gain a solid background in the science of rights.02font02br
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01font00During my high school years of experience, I have acquired a broad knowledge of natural and social sciences, where, my performance has been considered pleasing and honored all the times by my instructors. At the same time, I have experienced working in groups running simulation projects such as school administration, business management for one day or election campaigns. Furthermore, I have accomplished many assignments in social sciences mainly focusing on daily life problems such as law, family, state administration, society and many more. In order to show my overall performance, I have taken the liberty to attach to this motivation letter a list of grades acquired along my high school years for your viewing. 02font02br
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01font00I enjoy communicating with people and I believe that I am capable of influencing and convincing them by pursuing my ideas following the logical ways of reasoning. I am intrigued by human’s nature, society and the ways these two govern each other and I presume there exist ways to adjust and harmonize what goes wrong between them, something law may succeed to accomplish. It is for those reasons I have chosen to attend a law school concluding it is the one it fits best my aspirations and prospects.02font02br
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01font00I am confident that my determination to transform my interests and ambitions into academic excellence and intellectual independence are qualities that will promote me in my planned professional life. I am ready for a new challenge and I believe your University offers all of these and will assist me in taking this vital step towards attaining my goal. 02font02br
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01font00Looking forward to hearing from you, I thank you all for considering my application 02font02br
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01font00Sincerely,02font02br
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