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Nowadays, the technology is becoming more advance. For example, at the beginning the size of the cell phone is large and the screen is black and white but slowly becomes smaller and more colorful. Even now, the latest cell phone is touch screen such as i-phone4. From the above mention, we can find that the technology is changing very fast and it helps to enhance communication but we found that the relationship between parents and child is becoming looser.
Why is the relationship becoming looser? First of all, most of the parents more concentrate in theirs work. They feel that giving their child a better life is to provide them materially and neglected the child’s feeling. When the child feels that their parents do not care about them, they will start to prefer share their feelings or secret to their friends. Slowly, the relationship between the parents and child becomes loose.
The parents do not communicate with their child is one of the reason too. They say that their child should understand that they are so tired and need to get some rest. Then, this will give the child an impression that they are not important for their parents and started to run away from home. When parents found out that their child done something like that, it is too late to convince their child and strengthen the relationship because parents had hurt their child’s feelings and beliefs.
Some of the parents do really care their child until almost all the time keeps stick with them. Unfortunately, it has made the child feels that their parents over control their freedom. This is also one of the reasons too. Every person have the rights to get their freedom to relax their mind include child too. If they do not have enough freedom to relax their mind, the child will feel that their parents are annoying and irritating. As the time passes, parents and child will quarrel just for the freedom.
Next, the way that parents teach their child is one of the causes of the relationship between parents and child too. The child learns from their parents at the early stage especially about two to six years olds. Some of the parents, they teach their child must respect to the person who older than them especially their parents, grandfather and grandmother. However, the parents do not respect to their parents too. This will make the child thinks that why I should listens to my parents? My parents also did not respect to them too. Eventually, the relationship between parents and child will become loose.
Some of the parents are so pampered to their child. They love their child too much until every thing that the child asked they will fulfill it even though they unable to afford to buy the things the child wanted. This kind of behavior will bring up until the child becomes adult too. When the child has become an adult, the child will still keep asking their parents to buy what they want. If the parents do not buy it for them, they may abuse their parents. Then, the relationship of the parents and child will be loose.
Besides that, the friend of the child is one of the reasons too. Normally, child does not know how to differentiate the rights or wrongs. If the child mixes with the bad friends, their friends will influence them. When the child started to believe them, they will try to convince the child to do something wrong such as taking drugs. This will reduce the strength of the relationship between the parents and child slowly. This is because of when the child asked for money to buy drugs, the parents refuse to give it and started to quarrel and even come into wigs on the green.
Finally, one of the reasons is the parents does not know how to show their love towards to their loves ones. A lot of parents so shy to say “I love you”, “I miss you” or others word that are quite touching. They feel that it is too old for them to talk such words. Usually, parents will use scolding to show their love or care towards to their child. Unfortunately, the child will misunderstood them and talk back or argue with their parents. Then, the child will thought that their parents do not love them but treat them as their parent’s “medicine” of reduce stress. Eventually, the relationship will become loose.
In conclusion, loosen of the relationship between parents and child must be solves it as fast as possible so that the problems will not become serious. A healthy community needs a healthy family and a healthy family needs love. So, please retrieve your relationship between you and your parents. Don’t wait until you lost them!