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Hey there could u please help me reword and change this paragragh you would be a great help.
Animals that are non-ruminats are said to have simple stomachs,the walls of which are made of involuntary muscles.The arrangment /shape of organs in the digestive system differs between species.Food enters the stomach via the oesophagus.Once food has been processed it passes out the stomach into the small intestine.Both the entrance to the stomach(from the oesphagus),and the exit(into the small intstines),are controlled by narrow rings of muscles called sphincters.These control the flow passage of food into and out of the stomach. When the sphincters is contraced,it prevents the flow of food. When sphinter is relaxed,food can pass through.
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Animals that are non-ruminats are said to have simple stomachs,the walls of which are made of involuntary muscles.The arrangment /shape of organs in the digestive system differs between species.Food enters the stomach via the oesophagus.Once food has been processed it passes out the stomach into the small intestine.Both the entrance to the stomach(from the oesphagus),and the exit(into the small intstines),are controlled by narrow rings of muscles called sphincters.These control the flow passage of food into and out of the stomach. When the sphincters is contraced,it prevents the flow of food. When sphinter is relaxed,food can pass through.
Thank you you would be a life saver
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Hi, You have a few typings errors, but it seems to be well-written. Why do you want to reword it? In what way do you want to change it?
- Hi, You have a few typings errors, but it seems to be well-written.
- Why do you want to reword it?
- In what way do you want to change it?
- Clive
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Hi,
You have a few typings errors, but it seems to be well-written. Why do you want to reword it? In what way do you want to change it?
Clive
You have a few typings errors, but it seems to be well-written. Why do you want to reword it? In what way do you want to change it?
Clive
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Animals that are not ruminants are said to have simple stomachs, the walls of which are made of involuntary muscles. The arrangment and shape of organs in the digestive system differs between species. Food enters the stomach via the oesophagus (esophagus is the more common spelling). Once food has been digested, it passes out the stomach into the small intestine.
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