Could u help me revise my Motivation letter :)

Dear Sir or Madam:

My name is X and I am currently on the third year of the integrated master’s in mechanical engineering degree at Instituto Superior Técnico. I hope to express with this letter my great interest in partaking the Erasmus student exchange programme at the university of Rome Tor Vergata.

I have chosen to apply for University of Rome Tor Vergata as it is one of the most prestigious universities in Italy with faculty members of high international reputation. Not only that, I have also a keen interest in the modules related to automation, robots and intelligent systems that are offered in the master’s degree in Mechatronics Engineering.
Last but not least, I cannot think of a city with a richer cultural heritage than Rome, the eternal city, that will with no doubts, as I explore it, broaden my cultural horizons and help me develop as a person.

During my academic journey I found a profound interest in robots and this interest made me want to specialize in the area of Systems here in Instituto Superior Técnico. Spending a semester at University of Rome Tor Vergata would give me a chance to deepen my knowledge in this area and it would certainly have an impact in my future working career.

It would be an honor to spend one semester at the University of Rome Tor Vergata. This would give me a chance to deepen my knowledge in the inspiring, creative, and culturally rich city that is Rome. I am confident that my experience in Rome would be extremely exciting, fun, and valuable for both my studies and overall general development.

Thank you for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response and I am at your disposal for whatever you may need.

Yours faithfully
X