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Sinzi Posted 4 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Could u correct my essay 🤔

Live your own life like “aikido”

This is self-made. “aikido” is martial arts of relax and to use a opponent behaves.

It’s very unique. Audience think player has a great power like a magic. But it’s not.

It is important for aikido to understand human body and thinking. And then we can not surprise a opponent but also others. I haven’t been learned “aikido”. So the reason why I chose it is sports is particularly symbolic in terms of personal relations. I always want to surprise people. But it is very difficult if I see one-side. The theory is to think various point in other words “relax”. For example what does he/she think of me so far and what I have to do. Maybe people think it is hard to think such a thing everytime. But this case is occurs to express in words. So we can do with our feeling if we understand the spirit of “aikido”.

  

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Hello sinzi, Were you asked to write an introduction about yourself, or to write a paragraph about aikido?

  • Hello sinzi, Were you asked to write an introduction about yourself, or to write a paragraph about aikido?
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Hello sinzi, Emotion: smile

Were you asked to write an introduction about yourself, or to write a paragraph about aikido?

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