could u check my letter plz

With this letter I would like to explain my motivation for studying
International Business in general and why I chose Saint Andrews
university:

After completing secondary School with the french diploma ' économic
baccalauréat' in the summer of 2005, I would like to continue my
education at an institution of higher education, to obtain a Bachelor
of Science in International Business. In particular, I am interested
in learning more about the structure and organization of a company,
economical processes (in general), global economic coherences and
communications, new cultures and languages. I also want do develop my
methodical abilities and soft skills. Thereafter I want to use the
acquired knowledge to continue in a masters program of business,
aiming to be well prepared to enter the business world. My long-term
goal is to enrich an international operating company or to start as an
independent entrepreneur, bringing in new ideas and an efficient
working style gained through my higher education hopefully started at
S-A

Due to the international orientation of S-A I believe that your
offered International business program is greatly suitable for me,
combining my passion for global communication, international politics
and multicultural environment, as well as my love for organizing and
leading projects, in a professional way. Through my experiences in
several jobs, my travels abroad and my continuous voluntary work I
learned the values of commitment, teamwork and of independence.

I am confident that with my strong motivation, my personality, my
international and significant practical experiences and with the
International Business program on top, I will have a solid foundation
for a successful and fulfilling career, in which I plan to weld
relationships across cultures and ensure that intercultural
communication takes place effectively.

Enclosed you will find all required documents for the International
Business program. Thank you for taking the time to consider my
application. I look forward to a positive response and to a great time
in an outstanding educational program at S-A.


Yours respectfully