Could someone read and tel their opinion and if you see some mistakes could you please correct them?

Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to apply for the bachelor's degree program in Law and Business at R*****.
Since world has faced economic crises it is really important that you have the best education because of the rising unemployment and competition and in my opinion R***** is the best place to get top-quality education.
There are many reasons why R***** is the best place to study, but the three most important would be - international atmosphere, good start for further education and possibility to learn foreign languages.
R***** is a full member of exchange program "Erasmus" so the school has a very international atmosphere - you can meet new people, explore new cultures and expand your range of vision without leaving your country. Being socially and culturally active is essential for me as I have participated in international student exchange program "Comenius".
During my studies at R+++++ I learned three foreign languges - French, English and Russian. In my opinion, languges has a great value, because they are something indispensable - they help you communicate with other people and learn new things.
The most important reason why I would like to study in R***** is that it gives me a great start for my future studies and career. It offers a wide variety of elective and mandatory courses, that will help me to reach my goals.

Yours faithfully,
popopo