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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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Could someone proofread this for me?
"When I was your age, my family and I visited Switzerland. It was my first trip abroad, so I was quite excited. Little did I know I would spend the whole trip throwing up in paper bags. It was the altitude that, quite literally, made me sick to my stomach."
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The grammar is fine; you did a good job. For both stylistic and logical reasons, you must delete 'quite literally',which seems stupid there.
- The grammar is fine; you did a good job.
- For both stylistic and logical reasons, you must delete 'quite literally',which seems stupid there.
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The grammar is fine; you did a good job. For both stylistic and logical reasons, you must delete 'quite literally',which seems stupid there.
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