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  1. Leopard takes on the name of Doronjo and forges a new Doronbow Gang with Voltkatze and Elephantus to get revenge on the Yatter Kingdom.
  2. Leopard and her new Doronbow gang make their way through an abandoned train tunnel, hoping to sneak into Yatter Kingdom.
  3. Alouette thinks that Doronjo is an angel. The parents of both Alouette and her childhood friend, Galina, were taken by Yatterman.
  4. While on their journey, the gang meets a pregnant woman named Mitchan and her husband Beene and helps them out with some chores.
  5. The gang comes across a boy named Takeshi who enters himself and Galina into a martial arts tournament for the prize money.
  6. With the gang constantly being pursued by Goro, Leopard gets upset when Voltkatze and Elephantus tell her to give up pursuing the Yatterman.
  7. Delirious from hunger after days without food, the gang comes across a masochistic fisherman named Ryu and saves him from the Yatterman.
  8. While treating Leopard who has a fever, Galina tells her about Alouette's father, Gorozo, who entrusted him with Alouette's protection.
  9. Down to his last chance, Goro manages to capture Leopard, Voltkatze, and Elephantus and takes them to Abareshi Prison, an allegedly inescapable place.
  10. On their way towards the tower in the center of Yatter Metropolis, the gang surveys the factories people are being forced to work in.
  11. Dokurobey explains to Leopard and the others the truth behind Yatter Metropolis that even the people living there do not know about.
  12. Realising that the people need heroes to help them, Galina and Alouette take on the role of becoming the new generation of Yatterman themselves.
  

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