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Tamguatlay Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Could someone please improve on the sentence?

The driver of car ABC12345 has been charged for driving under Section 65 Chapter 567 and was fined $800 and disqualoified of all licence for the period of 3 months.

I find the above sentence awkwarrd. Could someone please improve on the sentence?

Thanks.
  

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Could someone please help? Thanks.

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Could someone please help? Thanks.

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