Could someone PLEASE help me(correct) with my Motivation Letter :(

Hello everyone,

Hope I'll get some help here...
Deadline is in 4 days for my application...
Thank you in advance if you'd considerate my message...

So, I'm writting a Motivation Letter for EVS

and can't help with right grammar and many more :/...

I'd be really thankull if you could check and and help me with my letter:

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Motivation Letter



Hello, my name is -- --. I am from -- -- and with this letter I would like to apply for --- project n. ---.

I decided to apply for this program as it perfectly fits my interests and provides knowledge and experience, which I am looking for, at the moment. I am a --(proession)--- and am going to be an --(profession). It is very important for me to be acquainted with child and youth psychology, to have good communication and interpersonal competences… This side of my profession is as much important for me as another, purely technical side.

On the other hand, I am a very enthusiastic, creative person with wide variety of interests and have a veritable experience in the field of youth in action activities. I like being involved in various activities which are not only enjoyable but also bring some interesting experiences, skills and competences.

I frankly love communicating with children and young people. It’s amazing how they see the world and how different and interesting they are. I strongly believe that every person is unique and love discovering and revealing one’s individuality.

All along my studies I’ve always been involved in activities related to the art. During two semesters I studied at -- --. where I have learned allot. For me this was the opportunity to accomplish my dreams and inspirations, to explore and structure my hobbies. In a spare time I make accessories: scarps, jewelry, toys… with different materials: felt, clay, some little jewelry details… I also make serigraphic/stencil drawings on t-shirts, bags, tableware… I am also a freelance makeup artist: In a spare time I work for “-- --” as a volunteer and give make up tutorial trainings). I can also consider cooking as one of my hobbies. I like --(country) -- food and can make many specialties of it. I also enjoy trying new culinary experiences.

Besides, in the meanwhile of my undergraduate studies I was an editor of -- --. My role generally was to provide information and to make a good communication between students and our organization, including running a bilingual web page. A very important benefit of our organization was an exchange program. We were accepting and sending students from/to many countries (Hungary, Poland, Czech Republic, Slovenia, Slovakia, Turkey, Estonia, Ukraine, Macedonia, Italy, Egypt...). We were organizing different events for incoming students and of course enjoying having time together.

Moreover, I was one of the coordinators and participants of:

“-- --” camp;

And “-- -- ”

So my experiences in all above mentioned fields make me think that I would fit perfectly with the volunteer activities of -- --.

On the other hand, it would be useful and interesting for children to get in touch with my different culture. --(country) -- isn't well known in European countries, though we have very interesting historical heredity and traditions, so I would like to provide my knowledge and experience in this project.

I’d like to zoom on my interest in --- (country): I fall in love with everything ---(country)-- when I was a 1st year student. The story is a little bit long, pathetic and teenage-like. (Maybe I’ll share it in the clubs of -- -- if I’d have this opportunity. Teenagers appreciate particularly, every time I tell it). Soon I made an internship in -- --. Even though it was a short term (2weeks) program, I’m very glad and proud that I’ve visited “-- --” and have had an opportunity to experience ---(country)-- culture and life from close. So I can speak a very little bit of ---(language)-- and am highly motivated to learn it better.

Consequently, I find a real match between my interests, motivation, experience and volunteers’ role in the -- --.

I am ready to learn and it would be a truly valuable opportunity for me if you would give me a chance to contribute to this project. I believe that this cooperation would be a mutual enriching experience.

Yours faithfully,

-- --

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I'm not sure about leaving all that story of "fallig in love" in this letter, it sounds familiar :-?
and besides, I have many solid grammar mistakes I guess :-?

I DO need HELP