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Alc24 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Could someone please help me correct this paragraph?
Could you please help me correct this paragraph?
This movie is good, it's the story of 2 people who fall in love and then lose sight of one another. For half the movie, they try finding one another, and frankly that's what keeps the audience going, wanting to see what happens. But the second they don't find each other, the movie loses steam and isn't as interesting.
Thank you
This movie is good, it's the story of 2 people who fall in love and then lose sight of one another. For half the movie, they try finding one another, and frankly that's what keeps the audience going, wanting to see what happens. But the second they don't find each other, the movie loses steam and isn't as interesting.
Thank you
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All and all very good. I suggest that if this is semi-formal writing (as opposed to an email to a friend) that you write numbers 1 through 10 as full words, one through ten. This is a common suggestion for written English.
- All and all very good.
- I suggest that if this is semi-formal writing (as opposed to an email to a friend) that you write numbers 1 through 10 as full words, one through ten.
- This is a common suggestion for written English.
- I suggest the following.
- This movie is good .
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All and all very good. I suggest that if this is semi-formal writing (as opposed to an email to a friend) that you write numbers 1 through 10 as full words, one through ten. This is a common suggestion for written English. I suggest the following.
This movie is good. It's
This movie is good. It's
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Hi Free Spirit!
I have to congratulate you the clarity and approachability of your explanations. That's great!
I have to congratulate you the clarity and approachability of your explanations. That's great!
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