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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

Could someone please fix my cover letter for an internship. Thank you.

Dear Sirs

Internship for Business Studies/Administration Students

I am applying for the above internship, as posted on the XYZ.com website on 29 November 2012.
This November, I have recently completed a Diploma in XYZ. While waiting for the results, I am seeking an internship at your company.

Your requirements:
Communication skills -- In XYZ class, I learned how to communicate effectively, both written and verbally, with people.
Teamwork -- During my studies, I participated in group work and presentations. This experience taught me the importance of working together to achieve group goals.
Punctuality -- My lecturers say that I always hand in my assignments on time. I also have a good attendance record, and arrive early for classes.

In addition to my education, I have also worked as an office assistant at college. This is part of the course, where students are trained to work in a model office.
In this role, I worked at the front office, staff room and senior staff room. This includes typing letters, entering student data into database, and answering telephone enquiries.

The education and experience makes me a suitable candidate for internship. Thank you for your consideration. If you have any questions, you may reach me at XYZ.
  

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com website on 29 November 2012. This November, I completed my diploma in XYZ, and I am now awaiting my final transcript. Your requirements: Communication skills : In XYZ class, I learned how to communicate effectively, both written and verbally, by [ doing/experiencing..

  • com website on 29 November 2012.
  • This November, I completed my diploma in XYZ, and I am now awaiting my final transcript.
  • Your requirements: Communication skills : In XYZ class, I learned how to communicate effectively, both written and verbally, by [ doing/experiencing..
  • ] Teamwork : During my studies, I participated in group work and presentations on the topics of [ AA and BB] .
  • This experience taught me the importance of working together to achieve group goals.
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Dear Sirs:

RE: Internship for Business Studies/Administration Students

I would like to apply for the above internship, as posted on the XYZ.com website on 29 November 2012. This November, I completed my diploma in XYZ, and I am now awaiting my final transcript.

Your requirements:

Communication skills: In XYZ class, I le
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