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Dietary choices having an impact on our environment is a recent and contemporary issue communicated through social media and has become a widely debated topic. In an article published on the ‘less meat less heat’ website by activist Hannah Lyong titled ‘The Climatarian Challenge’, Lyong presents a number of arguments to young Australian adults explaining that we must reduce our consumption of red meat and dairy to help reduce gas emissions and reduce climate change. Lyong puts forward her reasons with a tone of concern and makes her audience aware of the solution that is the climatarian challenge, lyong argues that Australians need to cut down on the already excessive amount of red meat in order to reduce our carbon emissions. Lyong then goes on to argue that the production of dairy is also damaging our environment and to stay true to the climatarian diet, the audience is encouraged to seek dairy alternatives. Finally, lyong suggest that eating local produce and being aware of food miles is vital.