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Madsmad Posted 12 years ago
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Could someone please correct this sentence?
A major challenge for home production is to optimize fat emulsions composition, in order to modulate environmental response in critical situations, through changes of color composition and water, soda and gas production and new substance expression.
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Hello. madsmad—and welcome to English Forums. I suggest some minor changes according to what I think you mean (the meaning of the original is not clear): A major challenge for home production is optimizing fat emulsion composition in order to modulate environmental response in critical situation s th rough changes in color composition, in water, soda and gas productio n, and in new substance expression.
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- madsmad—and welcome to English Forums.
- I suggest some minor changes according to what I think you mean (the meaning of the original is not clear): A major challenge for home production is optimizing fat emulsion composition in order to modulate environmental response in critical situation s th rough changes in color composition, in water, soda and gas productio n, and in new substance expression.
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Hello. madsmad—and welcome to English Forums. I suggest some minor changes according to what I think you mean (the meaning of the original is not clear):
A major challenge for home production is optimizing fat emulsion composition in order to modulate environmental response in critical situations through changes in color composition, in water,
A major challenge for home production is optimizing fat emulsion composition in order to modulate environmental response in critical situations through changes in color composition, in water,
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