Could someone please check my letter of motivation, thx a lot

Dear Mr. xxxxxx
I am writing to express my interest in applying for the master's degree programme in Marketing at the European Business School.

My interest in your Marketing Master

My major was International Business Management with a focus on marketing. I graduated from university at the end of last year. During my studies I was able to develop my skills, especially in the area of international marketing and distribution. At the same time, I obtained relevant skills during the many different projects needed for successful marketing activities and distribution techniques. During my internships I was able to gain valuable experience in e.g. market research, customer service, marketing and sales activities and statistics.
Regarding my bachelor degree, this master in marketing at the EBS is a perfect consecutive programme for me. Additionally to my previous education and my acquired knowledge I want to deepen my skills in order to have more certainty and reliability to reach a higher expertise.
The very good reputation, the excellent circumstances and the high quality teaching units of the EBS are major reasons to think that I will benefit from this master programme after and during this degree course. The well structured organization of the programme, the obligatory semester abroad and the very good connection of the EBS to top-class companies will help me gaining high quality knowledge and developing my personal and social skills.

My personal strength and skills

My strength are my ability to work independently, my communication skills as well as the organizational talent. I am always open-minded about new things and situations, thus I am not afraid of leaving familiar methods in order to find innovative solutions. Moreover, I have a good perceptive faculty, which enables me to understand complex issues. My ability to cope with pressure empowers me to solve even the toughest situations.

My future aims

I always considered my studies a prerequisite to accomplish my goal of getting involved in internationally orientated work. My personal aim is it to start my professional career in an interesting working environment with challenging tasks and to continue developing myself in order to face new challenges.

Sincerely,