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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

could someone please check my grammatical erros please..

Dear all,



First off, I would like to apologize for the delay in response to your query last week.



We would like to highlight you that we had made payment to your account on the timely manner for the past few months. However, we apologize for the delay in processing of July’s salary due to problem with our USD account. Nevertheless, please be advised that we have made the TT to your account last Friday and your salary for July shall be deposited into your account by tomorrow or Wednesday morning the latest.



Please be informed that we will ensure thist such delay would not be happening again for next time.



Regards,
  

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Dear all, First off of all, I would like to apologize for the delay in response responding to your query last week. We would like to highlight you that we had have made payment s to your account on the timely manner (or in timely manner) for in the past few months. However, we ( must ) apologize for the delay in processing of July’s the salary for the month of July due to a problem with our USD account.

— Abil

  • Dear all, First off of all, I would like to apologize for the delay in response responding to your query last week.
  • We would like to highlight you that we had have made payment s to your account on the timely manner (or in timely manner) for in the past few months.
  • However, we ( must ) apologize for the delay in processing of July’s the salary for the month of July due to a problem with our USD account.
  • Nevertheless, please be advised that we have made the TT to your account last Friday , and your salary for July shall be deposited into your account by tomorrow or Wednesday morning at the latest.
  • Please be informed that we will ensure (or make sure) thist that such delay would not be happening again for next time in the future.
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Dear all,


First off of all, I would like to apologize for the delay in response responding to your query last week.


We would like to highlight you that we had have made payments to your account on the timely manner (or in timely manner) for in the past few months. However, we (must) apologize
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I suggest:

on the timely manner punctually
that such a delay would will
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First of all I would like to apologize on the delay.


Is this right frame of sentence ???

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