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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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Could someone kindly proofread my small paragraph

Hello Everyone,

I just wish an other pair of eyes could check if there is any mistakes in the following before I send my cover letter to this employer.

As I read through the description of the posted job, I became more and more interested in working with you. I enjoy coding and work comfortably with HTML and CSS. I have experience working with InDesign to create print projects or digital publications. I worked with Flash and ActionScript to create animations and small applications. I also communicate very well in French as it is my first language.

Thank you kindly
Marie

  

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Hello Everyone, I just need an other pair of eyes before I send my cover letter to this employer and was wondering if the following paragraph has mistakes. As I read through the description of the posted job, I became more and more interested in working with you. I enjoy coding and work comfortably with HTML and CSS.

— MarieAndree1541

  • Hello Everyone, I just need an other pair of eyes before I send my cover letter to this employer and was wondering if the following paragraph has mistakes.
  • As I read through the description of the posted job, I became more and more interested in working with you.
  • I enjoy coding and work comfortably with HTML and CSS.
  • I have experience working with InDesign to create print projects or digital publications.
  • I worked with Flash and ActionScript to create animations and small applications.
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Hello Everyone,


I just need an other pair of eyes before I send my cover letter to this employer and was wondering if the following paragraph has mistakes.

As I read through the description of the posted job, I became more and more interested in working with you. I enjoy coding and work comfortably with HTML and CSS. I have experience working with InDesign to create

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I have only a few minor suggestions.

As I read through the description of the posted job, I became more and more interested in working with you. I enjoy coding and work comfortably with HTML and CSS (Do you mean to limit yourself to these 2?). I have experience working with InDesign to create print projects and digital publications. I have worked with Flash and Actio

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