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Ellymae Posted 21 years ago
Grammar
Could someone kindly check these sentences for proper punctuation
Nature was obviously very busy attiring her trees in costumes of deep reds, gold and rust.
Even a man like Joshua, who was known to be cold and bitter, could appreciate the spectacular beauty of fall.
Beside him, waddled his old bulldog Rusty, oblivious to it all; panting for breath, as he sniffed the leaves and picked up various scents along the journey.
Old age was creeping up on them, thought Joshua as he tried to keep up his pace.
Even a man like Joshua, who was known to be cold and bitter, could appreciate the spectacular beauty of fall.
Beside him, waddled his old bulldog Rusty, oblivious to it all; panting for breath, as he sniffed the leaves and picked up various scents along the journey.
Old age was creeping up on them, thought Joshua as he tried to keep up his pace.
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Hi, Nature was obviously very busy attiring her trees in costumes of deep reds, gold and rust. OK Even a man like Joshua, who was known to be cold and bitter, could appreciate the spectacular beauty of fall. OK Beside him waddled his old bulldog, Rusty , oblivious to it all, panting for breath as he sniffed the leaves and picked up various scents along the journey.
- Hi, Nature was obviously very busy attiring her trees in costumes of deep reds, gold and rust.
- OK Even a man like Joshua, who was known to be cold and bitter, could appreciate the spectacular beauty of fall.
- OK Beside him waddled his old bulldog, Rusty , oblivious to it all, panting for breath as he sniffed the leaves and picked up various scents along the journey.
- Old age was creeping up on them, thought Joshua as he tried to keep up his pace.
- OK Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,
Nature was obviously very busy attiring her trees in costumes of deep reds, gold and rust. OK
Even a man like Joshua, who was known to be cold and bitter, could appreciate the spectacular beauty of fall. OK
Beside him waddled his o
Nature was obviously very busy attiring her trees in costumes of deep reds, gold and rust. OK
Even a man like Joshua, who was known to be cold and bitter, could appreciate the spectacular beauty of fall. OK
Beside him waddled his o
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