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Dear all,
Wish to clarify that we have earlier arranged for Sarawak’s work permit. However, to proceed with this process and as per the Sarawak Local Immigration procedures, the applicant is required to enter to Sarawak first where we will then require submitting his document for process.
However, after spoken to your HUC team, the information that we received they will mobilize to Sarawak only in September or early October. Where at this point of time they will be working in KL and Lumut only.
As we always prefer to apply for Sarawak’s permit which covered for both Peninsular and East Malaysia and also due to strong relationship between our agent and Sarawak Local immigration, we have no choice but to proceed with peninsular permit first to avoid any unforeseen circumstances.
We also wish to highlight that due to strong relationship between our agent and Sarawak Local Immigration, we can obtained the work permit between 2 to 3 working days only. You may want to refer to our previous permit application for the installation team for Sarawak Permit.
Dear all,
Wish to clarify that we have earlier arranged for Sarawak’s work permit. However, to proceed with this process and as per the Sarawak Local Immigration procedures, the applicant is required to enter to Sarawak first where we will then require submitting his document for process.
However, after spoken to your HUC team, the information that we received they will mobilize to Sarawak only in September or early October. Where at this point of time they will be working in KL and Lumut only.
As we always prefer to apply for Sarawak’s permit which covered for both Peninsular and East Malaysia and also due to strong relationship between our agent and Sarawak Local immigration, we have no choice but to proceed with peninsular permit first to avoid any unforeseen circumstances.
We also wish to highlight that due to strong relationship between our agent and Sarawak Local Immigration, we can obtained the work permit between 2 to 3 working days only. You may want to refer to our previous permit application for the installation team for Sarawak Permit.
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Wish to clarify that we have earlier tried to arrange d for Sarawak’s work permit . However , but to proceed with this process and as per the according to Sarawak Local Immigration procedures, the applicant is required to enter to Sarawak first, where we will only then require submitting our submission of his documents will ensue for the required processing. However, after spoken to from your HUC team, the information that we received they will gather that mobiliz e ation to Sarawak will take place only in September or early October .
- Wish to clarify that we have earlier tried to arrange d for Sarawak’s work permit .
- However , but to proceed with this process and as per the according to Sarawak Local Immigration procedures, the applicant is required to enter to Sarawak first, where we will only then require submitting our submission of his documents will ensue for the required processing.
- However, after spoken to from your HUC team, the information that we received they will gather that mobiliz e ation to Sarawak will take place only in September or early October .
- Where at this point of time they will be working with work in KL and Lumut only in the meantime.
- As we always Though we prefer to apply for Sarawak’s permit which covered to cover for both Peninsular and East Malaysia and also due to strong relationship between our agent and Sarawak Local immigration , we have no choice but to proceed with peninsular permit first to avoid any unforeseen circumstances.
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Wish to clarify that we have earlier tried to arranged for Sarawak’s work permit. However, but to proceed with this process and as per the according to Sarawak Local Immigration procedures, the applicant is required to enter to Sarawak first, where we will only then require submitting our submission of his documents will ensue for t
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