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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Many people believe that music is a fantastic gadget for bringing people from all around the world together regardless the difference of cultures and ages. In my opinion, I completely agree with this viewpoint, due to the upbeat melody of many songs and the meanings behind. The number one reason why music occupy such an irreplaceable place for many people is that the upbeat and catchy melody in many songs can attract different group of people without language barrier. With these elements contain in different songs, people can easily feel excited and move their body without fully understand the lyrics. Taking K-pop as an example, eventhough most of the song use korean as a main languages, this genres still can make million people all around the world pay attention to because of their upbeat melody and catchy hooks. Due to the k-pop waves, random play dance become a great trend on youtube, and a lot of video showing people from many countries dance in k-pop songs which really pull humans from different culture closer. Furthermore, the meaning behind from the lyrics of many songs can be empathized by all people at many generation since in every songs, lyrics are delivered in a succinct way by composers base from many topic relate to our life such as love, society, countries and so on. Many Bolero songs, for example, was a really popular Vietnamese genre for most of elderly people in 2000s. However, many people at around 20-30 years old start to hear and sing Bolero songs more, because a lot of these songs got the meaningful and deep touching, written by reputable composer, so they feel more pathetic, especially when they hear it with their parents. We can simply find out the bonds between our parents or older people just by different types of music I'm sorry for posting my essay multiple times, since it didn't separate each paragraph properly so i have to do that.