Could someone help me with these 11 sentences

Could someone correct my corrections? thanks

1 Act as if you’re looking for your words and put a french touch to/on your accent. She'll love it. Don't know
2 What’s the height minimum/minmimum height you have to be to become a model. Minimum height...
3 Whats the record for highest dive from a cliff? (How would you say it?) Don't know
4 I have to go even if I would have loved to stay. OK
5 Play the way I would with my money/like its my money/as if its my money. ALL 3
6 What do you care if I go out/what I do with my time. BOTH
7 That’s a sign of a player that’s on the brink of defeat. OK
8 What had become an ugly part of the city suddenly became one of Manhattan 's most attractive. OK
9 She always has a nasty attitude in adversity. I don't know
10 I bet on the fact that I'll beat you. OK
11 Thats his taste not mine. So she might be ugly. OK
12 Out of 100 adolescents, how many think they will succeed better than their parents in life? Don't know
13 Her phone number ends with 45. End in 45

Thanks