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Babyblue_girl08 Posted 18 years ago
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could someone help me this paragraph

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00 hi everyone, can u guys please this paragraph for me? I really need to fix this paragraph to pass my engllish class. So please help me to check my grammar. Thanks in advance01font05002font02h2

00In the letter written by Ernesto Meza to city of 00, he tells about his concerns and his neighbor concerns about missing light in their area. He had mentions some crime that happen in their area because of the failure of the street light. I feel disappoint to the city of 00 because since too many of letter had sent to them but they didn’t do any action. I know Ernesto and his neighbors all they want just a street light so that they can be safe.02br
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00After read this letter, I feel lucky that I live in a safe area and I don’t need to worry about the street light and leave the house with no one watch over it. Back in the 010200 I had been living there several years but I didn’t hear any crime and I don’t have any problem with my neighbor. Every time I got home late from school I feel safe because of the street light.02br
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00On the summer day we used to go to my cousin house for our vacation, every time we leave the house my mom feels cared because no one watches our house. I always said to her “mom just turns the light on, so that everyone thought someone in the house and they don’t have any attention to steal something in our house” I know she worry to leave the house for long time and no one watch over it. After our vacation we went back home save and I feel glad that nothing had been stolen from our house. I think the reason that makes the place safe is because of the street lights.02br
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00I understand how Ernesto Meza writes this letter to the city of 00 because he was concerns about the safety in his area. I know street lights are really important to us, because it can make us safe. So I hope the city of 00 should do any action for them.02br
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02br 01i 00I have underlined some problem areas:02i 02br 01h2 01u 00hi02u 00 01u 00everyone, 02u 00can 01u 00u02u 00 guys 01u 00please this02u 00 paragraph for me? I really need to fix this paragraph to pass my 01u 00engllish02u 00 class. So please help me to check my grammar.

  • 02br 01i 00I have underlined some problem areas:02i 02br 01h2 01u 00hi02u 00 01u 00everyone, 02u 00can 01u 00u02u 00 guys 01u 00please this02u 00 paragraph for me?
  • I really need to fix this paragraph to pass my 01u 00engllish02u 00 class.
  • So please help me to check my grammar.
  • Thanks in advance02h2 00In the letter written by Ernesto Meza to 01u 00city02u 00 of Stockton, he tells about his concerns and his 01u 00neighbor 02u 00concerns about missing 01u 00light02u 00 in their area.
  • He 01u 00had mentions02u 00 some crime that 01u 00happen02u 00 in their area because of the failure of the street light.
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01u00hi02u00 01u00everyone, 02u00can 01u00u02u00 guys 01u00please this02u00 paragraph for me? I really need to fix this paragraph to pass my 01u00engllish02u00 class. So please h

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0i know, i have a huge problem with the verb tense. can i ask a favor? if you don't mind can you fix it for me? Can u change the verb tenses for me? Because i really need it for tomorrow in English class. Can u please help me?0-
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00That's no way to learn English. Put some effort into this. You're the one getting graded, not I.0-
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0 i know,that why im here to ask help and i think i can't fix all my mistake,beacuse i need to pass it for tomorrow and English is my third language that why i'm so poor of it.0-

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