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PinkThai Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Could someone help me check my task ?Q: Write at least 10 sentences telling about what you did last summer and what you will do next summer. Write in simple, compound or complex sentences.

Last summer, my family and I spent our holidays a week from the busy city and stayed at the Rayong, Beach Villa, I was expecting a holiday villa close to the beach, but got way more than I was expecting.
They take good care of it, and it's immaculate.

We got there (or we went there) by car and even drove to the beach, which was only an hour and a half away from my home.

It is on the secluded area of the beach so it was nice and quiet, but it was close enough to drive to find some seafood to eat or even walk to the hotel next door to their restaurants.

In brief; it was a summertime get away and we had a great time.

Pattaya is also my favorite province; in fact, I plan to spend one week there next year.

First of all we’ll celebrate the traditional Thai New Year and sprinkle water on the elders, for as a show of respect.

Next we’ll go Buddha Mountain (Khao Chi Chan) and pay respect to Buddha images, for Buddhists pay respect to the Buddha to show their gratitude to Him.

After that I would bring my family to the seaside and take photographs, for those photos will be a great memory to take back from the trip.

Finally, I might go swimming with my daughter, and my mother might go either.

where need to be solve please let me know?
  

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Hello, and welcome to English Forums. I have underlined some problem areas in your sentences. Please post your revised sentences here.

Last summer, my family and I spent our holidays a week from the busy city and stayed at the Rayong, Beach Villa, I was expecting a holiday villa close to the beach, but got way more than I was expecting.
They take good care of it
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Hi! My task was revised. There are correct?

Last summer, my family and I spent our holidays from the busy city and stayed at the Rayong Beach Villa, I was expecting a holiday villa close to the beach, but got way more than I was expecting.
They take good care of it, and it's immaculate.

We got there (or we went there) by car and even drove to the beach, which was only an hour
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I have underlined the remaining problems:

Last summer, my family and I spent our holidays from the busy city and stayed at the Rayong Beach Villa.

It was a summertime get away that we had a great time.

First of all, we’ll celebrate the traditional Thai New Year and sprinkle water on the elders, for a show of respect.

After that I will
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Last summer, my family and I spent our holiday from the busy city and stayed at the Rayong Beach Villa.

It was a summertime getaways that we had a great time.

First of all, we’ll celebrate the traditional Thai New Year and sprinkle water on the elder, for a show of respect.

After that I will bring my family to the seaside and take photographs, for those photos will be a
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No, you are not addressing the problems correctly. Please try again:

Last summer, my family and I spent our holiday from the busy city and stayed at the Rayong Beach Villa.

It was a summertime getaways that we had a great time.

First of all, we’ll celebrate the traditional Thai New Year and sprinkle water on the elder, for a show of re
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