Could someone give me a feedback please? it is very important. thanks a lot

Firstly, I would like to work for the XXXXXXXX GROUP due to the fact that it is a a global company that sees the diverstity, its most important asset in the competitiveness of the Aviation Industry. Secondly, I am seeking new challenges in a company with diversified businesses in order to develop my career in a short term. Actually, I believe that the opportunities offered in my native country, such as the World Cup in 2014 and the Olympics in 2016, could be vital in the development of future businesses for the Group in Brazil.