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Nana555 Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Could someone correct my short email plz



Thank you so much for your informative email. I will contact Pushilla and ask her about the accomodation. The thing that made me confused a little bit that my dad will come with me and stay for a few weeks before going to visit his friend in FL, so we might stay at a hotel first. I probably take a stidio after he leaves. Today, I recieved an email from the embassy and asked me to submit a copy of my passport and fill out the form of requesting the approval letter of scholarship, I think my process in underwent now even if I have

not submit the official letter yet. I'm so happy to write this email and inform you, in addition, start plan to my next place to do my master program. Hopefully to get the VISA in the proper time.
  

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Thank you so much for your informative email. I will contact Pushilla and ask her about the accom m odation . The thing that made me confused a little bit was that my dad will come with me and stay for a few weeks before going to visit his friend in FL, so we might stay at a hotel first.

  • Thank you so much for your informative email.
  • I will contact Pushilla and ask her about the accom m odation .
  • The thing that made me confused a little bit was that my dad will come with me and stay for a few weeks before going to visit his friend in FL, so we might stay at a hotel first.
  • ] a st u dio after he leaves.
  • Today, I recieved an email from the embassy , which asked me to submit a copy of my passport and fill out the form of requesting the approval letter of scholarship .
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Thank you so much for your informative email. I will contact Pushilla and ask her about the accommodation. The thing that made me confused a little bit was that my dad will come with me and stay for a few weeks before going to visit his friend in FL, so we might stay at a hotel first. I
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Also, "recieved" should be "received". The basic rule is "i comes before e, except after c - with exceptions."
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Thank you so much free_spirit

I really appreciate your help

Regards

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