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I have written about biography of famous football player .
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Steven Gerrard , who is a famous football player , was born in Mersyside in 1980. He attended in Cardianal Heenan High school. When Gerrard was 5 years old, he started play football in his school team.
In 1992, at age of only 12 years old, he joined to Liverpool Club. He made his debut versus Blackburn in 1998. Also in 2000 versus Ukrain. In 2001 He scored his first goal versus Germany, and England won with result 5 to 1 due to Gerrard .
In the world cup 2002, he did enter to it because he has had groin injury. Gerrard became a captain for Liverpool club and for his country team in 2003. In 2007, he is married of Alex Curran. He has three children, two sons and one daughter.
In his live, he played 510 games, and score 126 goals. Gerrard had got a lot of award, such as Young Player of the Year (2001), Carling Cup X 2, Champions League X 1 and FA Cup X 2
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Hi guys
I have written about biography of famous football player .
And I need to correct it so
Could someone correct my paragraph Please?
Steven Gerrard , who is a famous football player , was born in Mersyside in 1980. He attended in Cardianal Heenan High school. When Gerrard was 5 years old, he started play football in his school team.
In 1992, at age of only 12 years old, he joined to Liverpool Club. He made his debut versus Blackburn in 1998. Also in 2000 versus Ukrain. In 2001 He scored his first goal versus Germany, and England won with result 5 to 1 due to Gerrard .
In the world cup 2002, he did enter to it because he has had groin injury. Gerrard became a captain for Liverpool club and for his country team in 2003. In 2007, he is married of Alex Curran. He has three children, two sons and one daughter.
In his live, he played 510 games, and score 126 goals. Gerrard had got a lot of award, such as Young Player of the Year (2001), Carling Cup X 2, Champions League X 1 and FA Cup X 2
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Hi, I made some suggestions for you. Steven Gerrard , (no space before a comma) who is a famous football player , (no space before a comma) was born in Mersyside in 1980. He attended in Cardianal Heenan High school.
- Hi, I made some suggestions for you.
- Steven Gerrard , (no space before a comma) who is a famous football player , (no space before a comma) was born in Mersyside in 1980.
- He attended in Cardianal Heenan High school.
- When Gerrard was 5 years old, he started play football for in his school team.
- (Usually a biography is in date order.
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Hi,
I made some suggestions for you.
Steven Gerrard , (no space before a comma) who is a famous football player , (no space before a comma) was born in Mersyside in 1980. He attended in Cardianal Heenan High school. When Gerrard was 5 years old, he started play football forin his school team. (Usually a biography is in date order. A person does
I made some suggestions for you.
Steven Gerrard , (no space before a comma) who is a famous football player , (no space before a comma) was born in Mersyside in 1980. He attended in Cardianal Heenan High school. When Gerrard was 5 years old, he started play football for
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Thank you for correct the paragraph
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in this sentence ( His international debut was also in 2000 versus Ukraine )
just I remove (also) or (also in)
but
in this sentence ( His international debut was also in 2000 versus Ukraine )
just I remove (also) or (also in)
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Sorry!
He had two debuts - one locally in England, and one international.
The sentence should be:
His international debut was in 2000 versus Ukraine.
He had two debuts - one locally in England, and one international.
The sentence should be:
His international debut was in 2000 versus Ukraine.
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