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Assman Posted 17 years ago
Letter Writing
Could someone correct my grammar please? (26MAR)
Hi all,
I would be grateful if someone correct my mistakes.
Q:
You have just spent a weekend staying at the Lilo Hotel in Adelaide. When you get home you find that you have left a bag at the hotel.
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A:
Dear Sir,
I stayed at your hotel to spend my weekend holiday last week. The wonderful accommodating environment and nice services were also memorable. That should be a wonderful trip to me, however, I found that my bag has been left in hotel room after I return home yesterday.
I remember that my room number should be RM110 in phase II. My bag was made my leather and the colour was black, the size of it was just a little smaller that a notebook computer.
I can be reach via my cell phone number 97777777. Please let me know if you find it.
Regards
John
I would be grateful if someone correct my mistakes.
Q:
You have just spent a weekend staying at the Lilo Hotel in Adelaide. When you get home you find that you have left a bag at the hotel.
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A:
Dear Sir,
I stayed at your hotel to spend my weekend holiday last week. The wonderful accommodating environment and nice services were also memorable. That should be a wonderful trip to me, however, I found that my bag has been left in hotel room after I return home yesterday.
I remember that my room number should be RM110 in phase II. My bag was made my leather and the colour was black, the size of it was just a little smaller that a notebook computer.
I can be reach via my cell phone number 97777777. Please let me know if you find it.
Regards
John
Top answer
iam not so professional but i hope this can help u Dear Sir, I stayed at your hotel to spend my weekend holiday last week. The wonderful accommodating environment and nice services were also memorable. It was a wonderful trip for me, however, I found that I forgot my bag my returning to home yesterday.
- iam not so professional but i hope this can help u Dear Sir, I stayed at your hotel to spend my weekend holiday last week.
- The wonderful accommodating environment and nice services were also memorable.
- It was a wonderful trip for me, however, I found that I forgot my bag my returning to home yesterday.
- I can remeber that my room was NO 110 in Phase II.
- My bag was made of leather and its colour is black.
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iam not so professional but i hope this can help u
Dear Sir,
I stayed at your hotel to spend my weekend holiday last week. The wonderful accommodating environment and nice services were also memorable. It was a wonderful trip for me, however, I found that I forgot my bag my returning to home yesterday.
I can remeber that my room was NO 110 in Phase II. M
Dear Sir,
I stayed at your hotel to spend my weekend holiday last week. The wonderful accommodating environment and nice services were also memorable. It was a wonderful trip for me, however, I found that I forgot my bag my returning to home yesterday.
I can remeber that my room was NO 110 in Phase II. M
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Hi,
Letters like this need to be short and to the point. The fact that you enjoyed good service there is not important. If you mention is, it should be after you say what you need.
I have just returned from a weekend stay at your hotel and realized that I left my bag behind. I stayed in room RM110 in Phase II (I have no idea what that means. Here, we just say "Room 1305.") It is
Letters like this need to be short and to the point. The fact that you enjoyed good service there is not important. If you mention is, it should be after you say what you need.
I have just returned from a weekend stay at your hotel and realized that I left my bag behind. I stayed in room RM110 in Phase II (I have no idea what that means. Here, we just say "Room 1305.") It is
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I will correct your mistakes (I am a native English speaker who is learning English Language at college)
Dear Sir,
Last week, I spent a weekend in your hotel which had a wonderful accommodating environment and good services. It should have been an enjoyable trip, however, when I returned home yesterday I found that my bag had been left in the hotel room.
The number of my ro
Dear Sir,
Last week, I spent a weekend in your hotel which had a wonderful accommodating environment and good services. It should have been an enjoyable trip, however, when I returned home yesterday I found that my bag had been left in the hotel room.
The number of my ro
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