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Eel Posted 14 years ago
Business & Finance

Could someone correct my grammar please

Hi, could u correct this text, please ?? )

Dear company.
I'm a manager of the company '--' which collaborate with different bridal boutuques on marketing and sales activities.
Could u possibly send me your last catalogue, the wholesale price list and also I would know conditions of purchase.
I'm waiting for ur earliest reply.
Yours faithfully,
  

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Hello, Here is my suggestion : ----- Dear company, I'm a manager of the company '--' which collaborate with different bridal boutiques on marketing and sales activities. Could you possibly send me your last catalogue, the wholesale price list and the conditions of purchase? I'm waiting for your earliest reply.

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  • Hello, Here is my suggestion : ----- Dear company, I'm a manager of the company '--' which collaborate with different bridal boutiques on marketing and sales activities.
  • Could you possibly send me your last catalogue, the wholesale price list and the conditions of purchase?
  • I'm waiting for your earliest reply.
  • Yours faithfully, ----- or ----- Dear company, I currently have the position of manager of the company '--' which collaborate with different bridal boutiques on marketing and sales activities.
  • I would like you to send me your last catalogue, the wholesale price list and the conditions of purchase, as soon as possible.
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Hello,

Here is my suggestion:

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Dear company,

I'm a manager of the company '--' which collaborate with different bridal boutiques on marketing and sales activities.
Could you possibly send me your last catalogue, the wholesale price list and the conditions of purchase?

I'm waiting for your earliest reply.
Yours faithfully,
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thank you very much!!
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