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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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could someone correct my essay pls

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00My Favourite Room02br
00My favourite room would be my own room of course. Throughout the years I have bought and assembled all sorts of silly items to decorate my room. There are posters as tall as you stand, little lights, which are fixed in the ceiling, and a lot of self-made paintings and photographs that all give my room its unique style. Although my room is very small, it easily holds all the stuff I need to relax and feel right at home.02br
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00It's a great place to hang out. My room doesn't offer stress related items such as a bumping stereo, computer or a television. My room purely represents relaxation for all that enters the room and for yourself the most, because after you get home from school or if you want to get away from everything around you it's the ideal place to be. In the centre of my room you'll find a big doublesized bed, which is very useful for somebody whose friends come over to sleep almost every week. There lays a large beige spread made of the most soft Egyptian cotton you've ever felt. I have six pillows, that excist from 2 large ones, 3 normal ones and 1 tiny one. One of the most important things in my room is its atmosphere, which exists from the prayers I pray every day. Those prayers are kept in the extra space in the corner heading south in my room where it's absolutely clean.02br
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00My room is my haven. Everything I could need and want to have fun in everyday life is in it. Many have complimented me for keeping it so empty and clean without getting a unpleasant feeling. 02br
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0Is this for an assignment?0-
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0Not only an assignment, but a double post. 02br
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00Faisal, please do NOT post the same essay twice, and please do not submit mutliple demands for review within one hour of posting if you don't have an answer immediately.0-

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