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My Grandmother’s Cookies

I have never eaten like my grandmother’s cookies. My grandmother makes the most delicious cookies in the whole world. I enjoy eating her cookies whenever I visit her village. I have tried cookies in many places, but there is nothing emulate her cookies.

I feel excited whenever my family’s getting ready to visit my grandmother’s village. She makes sugary crunchy cookies with molten chocolate bars. When I enter her house, I smell melted butter all over the house and I know that she makes her special tasty cookies. I love eating the cookies directly from the oven, it is like a bomb explodes in my mouth.

I miss my grandmother’s cookies, but I cannot visit her every day because she lives in a very far village. So far, I haven't found cookies that can compete hers.