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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Could someone correct my english - Many Thanks

I am not sure. I have meet my objectives. My role has been change slightly in the year.

My main object was find better purchase order system. Unfortunately we did not buy PO Software but our old system seems working well at the moment Most department raising their PO without any chasing. Rachael PO Track is helped but not solves the problem. She still want to see the invoices, Generally there is no big problem.

We have good relationship with our supplier. I always get good feedback from them.

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We have separate stocks account from Purchase Ledger, This is give me more time and I can control my entire supplier without getting so stress.

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I wish we have separated Stock account much earlier

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I am going to change couple of thing with Po. which is give us motley control

DD and Electricity Power and British gas account need some work done. I’m still working with them

General purchase Ledger work and I am happy to have any new role available

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Here is what I suggest. I am a native English speaker, but since I am not familiar with your line of work, please through these changes thoroughly and correct for any problems. I am not sure whether I have met my objectives, because my role has changed slightly through the year.

  • Here is what I suggest.
  • I am a native English speaker, but since I am not familiar with your line of work, please through these changes thoroughly and correct for any problems.
  • I am not sure whether I have met my objectives, because my role has changed slightly through the year.
  • My main objective was to find a better purchase order system.
  • Unfortunately we were not able to buy purchase order software, but our old system now seems to be working well, and all departments are getting their purchase orders with no delay.
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Here is what I suggest. I am a native English speaker, but since I am not familiar with your line of work, please through these changes thoroughly and correct for any problems.

I am not sure whether I have met my objectives, because my role has changed slightly through the year.

My main objective was to find a better purchase order system. Unfortunately we were not ab

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