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YOUNG EUN YUN Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

Could someone correct my English email please?

I'm writing an email to change the date that I will be volunteering in one organization.
I need to write very politely but I 'm not sure I'm doing it right.

-Here is my email.

Dear 00

Thank you very much for your reply. Yes, I still wish to volunteer at 00. I've attached here the character reference from my previous employer. I was so glad she was pleased to write the reference letter for me.

I regret to say that I should change the date I will be volunteering there. I'm wondering if it would be okay to the centre to volunteer from 1st to 29th September, hopefully for 4 weeks.The reason why I should change is because I need to need to receive some documents from my university. The university staff called me yesterday and said that the documents will be sent to me by the end of August. so I changed my flight and am arriving UK at 7:00am on 1st September. I am so sorry for this. I would be so grateful if you consider my situation and change the volunteering date.

Thanks.

Best Wishes,
00
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Any correction would be very helpful to me. please help me
  

Top answer

YOUNG EUN YUN I'm wondering if it would be okay to the centre I'm wondering if it would be okay for the centre YOUNG EUN YUN to volunteer from 1st to 29th September to volunteer from the 1st to the 29th of September YOUNG EUN YUN The reason why I should change The reason for the change YOUNG EUN YUN August. so I changed my flight and am arriving UK August, so I changed my flight and will arrive in the UK YOUNG EUN YUN and change the volunteering date. and change the dates.

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  • YOUNG EUN YUN I'm wondering if it would be okay to the centre I'm wondering if it would be okay for the centre YOUNG EUN YUN to volunteer from 1st to 29th September to volunteer from the 1st to the 29th of September YOUNG EUN YUN The reason why I should change The reason for the change YOUNG EUN YUN August.
  • so I changed my flight and am arriving UK August, so I changed my flight and will arrive in the UK YOUNG EUN YUN and change the volunteering date.
  • and change the dates.
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YOUNG EUN YUNI'm wondering if it would be okay to the centre
I'm wondering if it would be okay for the centre
YOUNG EUN YUNto volunteer from 1st to 29th September
to volunteer from the 1st to the 29th of September
YOUNG EUN YUNThe reason why I should change
The reason for the change
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Dear 00,

Thank you very much for your reply. Yes, I still wish to volunteer at 00. I've attached here the character reference from my previous employer. I was so glad she was pleased to write the reference letter for me.

I regret to say that I should must change the date I can volunteer at 00. will be volunteering there. I'm w
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