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Nana555 Posted 16 years ago
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Could someone correct my email PLZ : )
plz could some one correct my mssg
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Yeah there are a lot of chinese people in Indonesia especially in Jakarta. Nowadays you can not even realize the difference between chinese and indonesian people, that because they started getting married from each other in past many years. I was born in Indonesia in small Island called ( Bali ) my grandparents imigrated to Sudan for looking for job, but all my other relatives are still in Bali and Jakarta. I'm very happy to know you close and I really hope that my process of upgrading my degree goes easelly, and once it happen I will try to come before March. Thank you for informed me regarding my internal supervisor, I took a look on his profile. As you said the name ( Sina ) indicates to a man. That's really interesting to use guessing game to know the sex of the person.
I will keep you update for my upgrading process
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Yeah there are a lot of chinese people in Indonesia especially in Jakarta. Nowadays you can not even realize the difference between chinese and indonesian people, that because they started getting married from each other in past many years. I was born in Indonesia in small Island called ( Bali ) my grandparents imigrated to Sudan for looking for job, but all my other relatives are still in Bali and Jakarta. I'm very happy to know you close and I really hope that my process of upgrading my degree goes easelly, and once it happen I will try to come before March. Thank you for informed me regarding my internal supervisor, I took a look on his profile. As you said the name ( Sina ) indicates to a man. That's really interesting to use guessing game to know the sex of the person.
I will keep you update for my upgrading process
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Hi Nana; I am assuming that this is very informal and casual. " --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Yeah , there are a lot of C hinese people in Indonesia especially in Jakarta. Nowadays you can not even tell realize the difference between C hinese and I ndonesian people, that because they started getting married to from each other (intermarrying) in past many years ago .
- Hi Nana; I am assuming that this is very informal and casual.
- " --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Yeah , there are a lot of C hinese people in Indonesia especially in Jakarta.
- Nowadays you can not even tell realize the difference between C hinese and I ndonesian people, that because they started getting married to from each other (intermarrying) in past many years ago .
- I was born in Indonesia on a small Island called ( Bali ) .
- M y grandparents e migrated to Sudan for looking for work job , but all my other relatives are still in Bali and Jakarta.
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Hi Nana;
I am assuming that this is very informal and casual. A formal email would not begin with "yeah." I don't understand what you mean by "upgrading my degree."
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Yeah, there are a lot of Chinese people in Indonesia especially in Jakarta. Nowadays you c
I am assuming that this is very informal and casual. A formal email would not begin with "yeah." I don't understand what you mean by "upgrading my degree."
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Yeah, there are a lot of Chinese people in Indonesia especially in Jakarta. Nowadays you c
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