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Nana555 Posted 15 years ago
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Could someone correct for me, thanx

Thank you so much for your quick response, I really appreciate your help. As the last conversation between us, I want to book a homestay for me and my dad. My study starts in February 30, but until now may dad and I have not received our Visas yet, It's almost three weeks since we sent our papers to Canadian Embassy. I believe that I suppose to receive them in the end of the forth weeks as they said.
That why I don"t know, if I have the right to book from now or It's better when I arrive to BC.
My question is do you have females homestay, I prefer to stay with females not males. If its yes so I don"t have to look for it on other websites because I prefer through GV.
I will inform you once I get my Visa.
Details about me,
- Sandra 22 years old and My dad 70 years old
- No pets
-Two meals
-One double room for two weeks.
- I will stay at a hotel first for couple of days, while that I can see the families and finish the process of the payment.
- We want to stay for two weeks then my dad will go back to Saudi and I will continue staying with the homestay If they are fits me.
  

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Let me show you how I would write this, and you can take the changes you want. My new wording is in boldface; deleted wording is crossed out. I also changed some of the punctuation, but that is harder to show.

  • Let me show you how I would write this, and you can take the changes you want.
  • My new wording is in boldface; deleted wording is crossed out.
  • I also changed some of the punctuation, but that is harder to show.
  • Thank you so much for your quick response, I really appreciate your help.
  • As we discussed earlier the last conversation between us , I want to book a homestay for me and my dad.
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Let me show you how I would write this, and you can take the changes you want. My new wording is in boldface; deleted wording is crossed out. I also changed some of the punctuation, but that is harder to show.


Thank you so much for your quick response, I really appreciate your help. As we discussed earlier the last conversation between us, I want to
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Thank you so much Dr. Your corrections really helped me a lot.

Thank you again
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Also, it should be "fourth week." not "forth week."

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