Could someone check this argumentative essay?

Hi guys, could anyone check this essay for me:
Every university must have enough facilities to afford its students' needs. In fact, some universities have a lack of facilities whick makes studying in it a hard process. This makes some students protest and sometimes demonstrate in large numbers. While some students prefer to negotiate the administration, I prefer to demonstrate in large numbers and stop going to the uneversity.

In my opinion, students' strike could paralyze the uneversity's transportation which can make a big financial loss for the transportation company. In this way, the company qill make a pressure against the university to do something to end this situation. The strike can also make a big financial loss for the university's cafeteria which will make them make pressure agaimst the administration. Moreover, the whole university will be empty and all of the faculties will be locked.

Furthermore, the purpose of going to the uneversity is to be educated. If students didn't go to the university, the main aim that the while university was built for will be hampered. As a result, the administration will be in hurry to accept all the union's goals. Lastly, if the strike stayed for along, the uneversity's reputation would be abused whick can make some families think before sending their children to this university.

I believe that some students argued that negotiation is the most suitable way to achieve the union's target. They said that we need to be more close to our administration, not to cut our relationship with them. However, the union has been negotiating since so long without even acieve one aim, and also the relationship between the administration and the union is not strong as required.

In conclusion, I completely disagree with negotiation as it is a slow solution, and it proved its uselessness. I believe that the time has come for action. We need to start our ddemonstrations, and stop going to our university.