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Alexandremelo Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Could someone check these texts please ?

    • With the aim of defining the theme of the 2009 Report, the project Brazil Ponto a Ponto has asked to Brazilians what should be changed in Brazil in order to improve their lives. The challenge was to achieve as many testimonials as possible.
    • With less than a month to accomplish the purpose, xxxxxxxx coordinated a communication plan composed of interviews in major media, twitter, facebook, SMS, sending ready-publication material for radios throughout the country, among other actions. xxxxx has also established partnerships to improve the campaign, as well as TIM that triggered a series of messages to a large part of their customer base.

    • In Just twenty days of operation, Visar´s job mobilized the press in several locations in the country such as Bahia, Minas Gerais, Piauí, Rio de Janeiro, Santa Catarina, São Paulo and Rio Grande do Sul, generating inchings above R$ 10 million. As a result, more than 500.000 people responded to the campaign website in question.

  

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Here are my suggestions With the aim of defining the theme of the 2009 Report, the project Brazil Ponto a Ponto the Brazil Ponto a Ponto project has asked to Brazilians what should be changed done in Brazil in order to improve their lives. The challenge /goal was to /to achieve as many testimonials as possible. With less than a month to accomplish the purpose, xxxxxxxx coordinated a communication plan composed of interviews in major media, twitter, facebook, SMS, sending material that is ready for publication ready-publication material for to radios throughout the country, among other actions.

— Floralex

  • Here are my suggestions With the aim of defining the theme of the 2009 Report, the project Brazil Ponto a Ponto the Brazil Ponto a Ponto project has asked to Brazilians what should be changed done in Brazil in order to improve their lives.
  • The challenge /goal was to /to achieve as many testimonials as possible.
  • With less than a month to accomplish the purpose, xxxxxxxx coordinated a communication plan composed of interviews in major media, twitter, facebook, SMS, sending material that is ready for publication ready-publication material for to radios throughout the country, among other actions.
  • xxxxx has also established partnerships to improve the campaign, as well as TIM that triggered a series of messages to a large part of their customer base.
  • In Just twenty days of operation, Visar´s job mobilized the press in several locations in the country such as Bahia, Minas Gerais, Piauí, Rio de Janeiro, Santa Catarina, São Paulo and Rio Grande do Sul, generating inchings above over R$ 10 million.
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Here are my suggestions

  • With the aim of defining the theme of the 2009 Report, the project Brazil Ponto a Ponto the Brazil Ponto a Ponto project has asked to Brazilians what should be changed done in Brazil in order to improve their lives. The challenge/goal
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Yeah. It helped me a lot.

Thank you kindly.

alexandre
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forgot one little thing

... has asked to Brazilians
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Weird, I crossed out some of the words, but it seems that when I posted it, it left that out,

leave out :

You could leave out : Was to

Leave out : For, Inchings, Above,
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