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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

Could someone check my motivation letter please.

0Hello, I have to write an motivation letter for the application to a ducth university, could anybody be so kind to chek it for me and give me some tips to make it better?02br
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00Dear Sir/Madam,02br
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00I am writing for the application at the MSc course in XXXXX 2007-2009.02br
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00I am an Italian student and have finished in November 2006 his Bachelor in Crop Science at the 00. I finished my studies in time and with the maximum grade of 110/110 with merit.02br
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00In future I would like to find to work for a GO or a NGO and I am firmly convinced in my choice. In this last year I have sent 2 month as a volunteer in Africa in the state of 00 with the association “01i00Amici del Malawi02i00”. My role as a volunteer was to take part t the different projects the association was carrying out. I realized a wooden machine for chopping cassava roots with the aim of making the processing of this product easier. I work for the planning of an irrigation project with the use of a petrol pump. After the first month the chiefs of the association gave me the task to manage and organize the works for the renovation of the local Health Centre of 01i00Pirmiti02i00.02br
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00I think I am very inclined for working in undeveloped countries. On a first hand for the great respect that I have been thought 00 00to have for different coulters and for my ability to work with others often with a background very different from mine. Then for the simple and effective way I use to work and solve problems.02br
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00The reason why I ask the application in the 00is because it has a world-wide reputation for its efficiency, for the level of its facilities. Further more I am sure that the master course I am applying for will give a strong and solid specific education for my future career. 02br
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00In my past years I have already lived in foreign countries like 0100France0200 (two years) and 00 (eight Years) were I have finished all my Low School Education in English speaking schools. My proficiency00 00in English is excellent but at the moment I don’t have any qualification that satisfies the minimal requirements for the applications.02br
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00At last as a student I have always demonstrate perseverant constancy. I am a good worker especially when the effort demanded is high. I understand that admission to your MSc program is competitive, but I am also confident that I'm qualified and prepared to meet all of its challenges. I would be most grateful if you could give my application your most favourable consideration.02br
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00Yours Faithfully02br
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00XXXX XXXX02br
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00It is very simple but its only the fisrt draft. I would like to know your oppinion before working more on it.02br
00If you could reply me at ale84baru@gmail com i would really appreciate it.02br
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00Thanks02br
00Ale0-
  
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