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Kardy moon Posted 8 years ago
Letter Writing

Could someone check my cover letter please? Much Appreciate it

Hi guys! Happy New Year! I was wondering if anyone can check my cover letter please? I am not sure about the grammar. Many Thanks!

Dear Recruitment Team,

Do you know why 2018 will be the most amazing year ever? Because a talented property analyst is ready for your company! My name is XXX and I am writing to express my interest in the position of property finance analyst at (company name), if any.

I have 2 years of experience in the property industry, which involves in property management, market research, due diligence, financial modelling and investment analysis of real estate investment opportunities.

I would like to draw your attention to some of my strengths which I believe will bring extra value to the team:

  1. Proficiency in financial modelling and property valuation using Excel
  2. Excellent communication and presentation skills
  3. Proven track record of professionalism and efficiency to work under pressure
  4. A positive attitude and an ability to work as part of a team

As a person who always put his career first, I am happy to relocate to (country) where the property market is more prosperous/ as it’s the (second) largest market of real estate investment, and I believe that (company) will enable me to tap my full potential.

I have attached a copy of my resume for your consideration. If you are looking for someone who is good at finding good investment projects in the competitive market, that is me! I would appreciate the opportunity to talk with you to discuss my application.

Thanking you in advance for your time.

Best Regards,

XXX

  

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Dear Recruitment Team, I am writing to express my interest in any available position as property finance analyst at (company name). I am a talented property analyst, and I am ready for the next step in my career! I have two years of experience in the property industry, mainly in property management, market research, due diligence, financial modelling and investment analysis of real estate investment opportunities.

  • Dear Recruitment Team, I am writing to express my interest in any available position as property finance analyst at (company name).
  • I am a talented property analyst, and I am ready for the next step in my career!
  • I have two years of experience in the property industry, mainly in property management, market research, due diligence, financial modelling and investment analysis of real estate investment opportunities.
  • I would like to draw your attention to some of my strengths which I believe will bring extra value to the team: Proficiency in financial modelling and property valuation using Excel Excellent communication and presentation skills Proven track record of professionalism and efficiency when working under pressure A positive attitude and an ability to work as part of a team As a person who always put his career first, I am happy to relocate to (country) where the property market is robust, and I believe that (company) will enable me to develop my potential.
  • I have attached a copy of my resume for your consideration.
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Dear Recruitment Team,

I am writing to express my interest in any available position as property finance analyst at (company name).

I am a talented property analyst, and I am ready for the next step in my career! I have two years of experience in the property industry, mainly in property management, market research, due diligence, financial modelling and investment

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