Could someone be so kind as to correct this?

Which is correct? Could you correct ones that aren’t please?

For all his faults, your father was a man who loved his people.

Although he had faults, your father was a man who loves his people.

Even if my phone was fully charged when I started the movie I wouldn’t be able to finish it. It would die before I did.

If I started a movie on my phone that was fully charged, I wouldn’t be able to finish it. It would die before I did.

It’s not in their interest that I miss my train.

It’s not in their interest for me to miss my train.

It looks bigger in real/real life than in the picture.

She fell asleep just as we got there/we were getting there.

What kind of shoes/shoe are you wearing?

What brand (of) shoe/shoes are you wearing?

What shoe brand are you wearing?

I don’t get bit as much as last summer. (About mosquitos)

I don’t get bit as often as last summer.

Thanks