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Uroczyalezajety Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing
Could somebody check my writing? please :D
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with summer job where I worked being employed by your company. As I think the job was definitely misunderstanding, there are some points I would like to mention.
First and foremost, I would like to draw your attention to the fact that you promised me a flat on the ground floor in good condition with own bathroom and kitchen, and on my arrival I was accommodated in small house with ten others people and one bathroom for all of us.
To make matters worse, my employer was rude and unpleasant, disagreeable and stubborn. I couldn’t have asked him for anything because he could say only ,,Harder work, better salary” and then he threatened me if I hadn’t gone away he would have fired me. The mood in company was awful and terrible.
Furthermore, I still have not received my salary despite the fact I should get it three weeks ago. If I don’t get it before the end of this week, I will notify the police.
It would be wise to provide your employees with better accommodation to avoid disappointment in future. Moreover, it would be better to hire more responsible and kind management.
Taking into consideration all the trouble I experienced I hope I can expect an apology. I would appreciate it if you provided me with a full explanation for all this situation.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with summer job where I worked being employed by your company. As I think the job was definitely misunderstanding, there are some points I would like to mention.
First and foremost, I would like to draw your attention to the fact that you promised me a flat on the ground floor in good condition with own bathroom and kitchen, and on my arrival I was accommodated in small house with ten others people and one bathroom for all of us.
To make matters worse, my employer was rude and unpleasant, disagreeable and stubborn. I couldn’t have asked him for anything because he could say only ,,Harder work, better salary” and then he threatened me if I hadn’t gone away he would have fired me. The mood in company was awful and terrible.
Furthermore, I still have not received my salary despite the fact I should get it three weeks ago. If I don’t get it before the end of this week, I will notify the police.
It would be wise to provide your employees with better accommodation to avoid disappointment in future. Moreover, it would be better to hire more responsible and kind management.
Taking into consideration all the trouble I experienced I hope I can expect an apology. I would appreciate it if you provided me with a full explanation for all this situation.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
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Dear Sir, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the summer job I took with where I worked being employed by your company and as a final notice for you to pay my overdue salary . As I think the job was definitely misunderstanding, there are some points I would like to mention. First and foremost, I would like to draw your attention to the fact that you promised me a flat on the ground floor in good condition with its own bathroom and kitchen .
- Dear Sir, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the summer job I took with where I worked being employed by your company and as a final notice for you to pay my overdue salary .
- As I think the job was definitely misunderstanding, there are some points I would like to mention.
- First and foremost, I would like to draw your attention to the fact that you promised me a flat on the ground floor in good condition with its own bathroom and kitchen .
- , and However on my arrival , I was accommodated in a small house with ten other s people and we had just the one bathroom for all of us.
- To make matters worse, my employer was rude , and unpleasant, disagreeable and stubborn.
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Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the summer job I took withwhere I worked being employed by your company and as a final notice for you to pay my overdue salary. As I think the job was definitely misunderstanding, there are some points I would like to mention.
First and foremost, I would like to draw your attention to
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the summer job I took with
First and foremost, I would like to draw your attention to
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