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Uroczyalezajety Posted 12 years ago
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Could somebody check my writing please?
Hi everyone! I guess you have never experienced such a moral dilemma!
Last Saturday I was coming back from the church and I found a new smart phone. Why I knew it was new? because it was in the box, which wasn't opened. When I opened the box and I saw the smart phone I felt only one emotion AMAZED. Yes, I was amazed. It was very valuable phone and I knew it . Under the box was some name and address. I thought that it was an owner this ,,toy". Then I felt dilemma. ,,Should I hand in or should I keep it?" I asked myself. I had to make a decision and it wasn't simple. I decided to sleep with this question. Next day I woke up and I had a solution. ,,I have to hand in the smart phone" I thought and I got dressed. I found this address in Internet and I gone there. An owner was very surprised and he thanked me. When I was going away he stopped me and gave 50zl.
So, I think I did good because if I lost something of mine, I would get something back. I've learnt something. If I want some new stuff, I have to go to the work and earn for it because nothing what is not my never be my. I hope everything will be all right now.
Last Saturday I was coming back from the church and I found a new smart phone. Why I knew it was new? because it was in the box, which wasn't opened. When I opened the box and I saw the smart phone I felt only one emotion AMAZED. Yes, I was amazed. It was very valuable phone and I knew it . Under the box was some name and address. I thought that it was an owner this ,,toy". Then I felt dilemma. ,,Should I hand in or should I keep it?" I asked myself. I had to make a decision and it wasn't simple. I decided to sleep with this question. Next day I woke up and I had a solution. ,,I have to hand in the smart phone" I thought and I got dressed. I found this address in Internet and I gone there. An owner was very surprised and he thanked me. When I was going away he stopped me and gave 50zl.
So, I think I did good because if I lost something of mine, I would get something back. I've learnt something. If I want some new stuff, I have to go to the work and earn for it because nothing what is not my never be my. I hope everything will be all right now.
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) church and I found a new smart phone. Why How did I kn o w it was new? B ecause it was in the box, which wasn't opened (hadn't been opened ) .
- ) church and I found a new smart phone.
- Why How did I kn o w it was new?
- B ecause it was in the box, which wasn't opened (hadn't been opened ) .
- When I opened the box and I saw the smart phone, I felt only one emotion : (you can also use a dash here) AMAZED.
- Yes, I was amazed.
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Last Saturday I was coming back from the (if you attended services, omit "the." If you were picking up your children at that place, leave it in.) church and I found a new smart phone. Why How did I know it was new? Because it was in the box, which wasn't opened (hadn't been opened ). When I opened the box and I saw the smart phone, I
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