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Can advertising be called an art? This question is a loaded one, for people have very different definitions of what is considered art. For someone not only is art a skill, it is also a craft or a work. Supporters of advertising suppose that it is an enormous opportunity to unload self-expression, whilst opponents maintaining that it can’t be art since it cannot be passed down from generation to generation.
Firstly, advertising has a timeline and the old advertises are replaced for new which have completely different meaning and in any cases have something common with predecessors. Experts are of the opinion that, advertising must be relevant and transparent and these two features immediately eliminate it in being an art.
Secondly, it is often argued that advertising incredibly shuts our minds and we have to think only in one way because giving people freedom of interpretation is not an aim. For instance, advertising must be able to relate but art must not. We have to remember that it is still amazingly controlled and it is designed to stimulate.
In contrast, supporters of advertising as an art suppose author of it must be person who is like a Big Creator who have to design something what won’t be in commonplace and will draw rapidly attention. Many people feel that it is characteristic for art and artist and nowadays human race is extremely demanding and they want always only new things.
Furthermore, it is generally felt that advertising is an art how to spell dreams. Actors have to be amazingly convincing if they would like to earn money for spelling their products. For example, they have to be tenacious and persistent, young and adaptable if they are driven by the idea of quickly becoming affluent.
Taking everything into account, it is true that advertising is an art and is not an art, but I suppose on no account can we name it as art because daily are produced many new advertisings and people are forgetting about yesterday’s “an art” since if something is really an art it will be learn for a long time.