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Uroczyalezajety Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

Could somebody check my writing? :D please

Dear Sir,
I read your advertisement in a local newspaper and I would like to ask a few questions concerning your offer since in my opinion it looks interesting and inviting. I am planning to volunteer this summer holiday and that is why I found this offer interesting.
First of all, I have some doubt concerning the itinerary. I would like to know where exactly are these place in Africa and which countries will be in our care. It would be useful for me to know if you accept teenagers under eighteen.
Could you give me more information about duties? I also need to know what kind of food we will be getting because I have extremely strict diet and I have to know what take with me if you choose me.
Why should you take me? I have always wanted to be one of the rescue team. When I finished 12 years I started to help local organization to collect money for treatment people with cancers. I have to say I copy with stress and high temperatures excellently. I have finished first aid courses and I know what to do when somebody needs help.
Finally, I know a lot of languages and it is easy for me to hit it off with other people because I am always smiling.
I would be grateful to receive this information as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ.
  

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Dear Sir, I read your advertisement in a local newspaper and I would like to ask a few questions concerning your offer since in my opinion it looks interesting and inviting. I am planning to volunteer this summer holiday and that is why I found this offer interesting. First of all, I have some doubt concerning the itinerary.

  • Dear Sir, I read your advertisement in a local newspaper and I would like to ask a few questions concerning your offer since in my opinion it looks interesting and inviting.
  • I am planning to volunteer this summer holiday and that is why I found this offer interesting.
  • First of all, I have some doubt concerning the itinerary.
  • I would like to know where these places are in Africa exactly and which countries will be covered .
  • It would be useful for me to know if you accept teenagers under eighteen.
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Dear Sir,
I read your advertisement in a local newspaper and I would like to ask a few questions concerning your offer since in my opinion it looks interesting and inviting. I am planning to volunteer this summer holiday and that is why I found this offer interesting.
First of all, I have some doubt concerning the itinerary. I would like to know where these places are in Africa exactly

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